I read part 2 of Infection, it was a lot better than part 1. A few typos here and there but it was clear that you put a lot more effort into this one. The bit where Rhylie appeared was kinda confusing but otherwise keep it up!!
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Her existence is explained, in detail, in Incubation. I'll start on writing it as soon as I type up the third part of Infection.
Zalfurius
Deadlines put pressure on projects that then become rushed. Take your time!!
J0hnTheF1sherman (Updated )
Thanks. I seem to do better at delivering more work when I just go with the flow, rather than setting a date. The second part is up, now, and is about twice as long as part 1. I have to thank you for mentioning adding more detail. So, thank you again, and enjoy.